A Frend for Babby Kaingaroo
- Kate Atkinson
- Dec 3, 2018
- 2 min read
(A Friend for Baby Kangaroo)
You're in for a treat! I have found my writing books from primary school. I will be posting some of my stories in their original spellings... and their translated ones. This first story is from year 1, when I was 5 years old, it's a retell of a picture book I read. It definitely needs translating! (Take note of the very unnecessary capital letters).
Original version
Wonas a pony time terra was a baby kainggaroo and He wontid some Frens. He Sor some babby raeddits. He asrkct bo you waste To come for a ridde. yes ples sed the rabbs intern snekc snak came atoing. won you like some huip? yes ples sed The kagaroo so sneck snak lict kagaroos tume all the radds jummpt uet. The rupps war Having fun. Kangaroo was havin fun. The raddits war Hving fun. Miss Kgaroo tagke you Tagkc you it was algwvale rid you cor buns Hiy. Wind fol jumping. I wont anger rib plus ok but it will be a bit skwesy. I like the bunsing its rely fun now can We go home it was resl fun mum can i go agen mum? yes you can. you buns reley Hicy. Plock on The groys snece snack lict kagroos tume otl the ruppsgamt out. Tank you vere muk.
Translated version
Once upon a time there was a baby kangaroo and he wanted some friends. He saw some baby rabbits. He asked do you want to come for a ride. "Yes please" said the rabbit. Then sneaky snake came along. Would you like some help? Yes please said the kangaroo. So sneaky snake licked the rabbits tummy. All the rabbits jumped out. The rabbits were having fun. Kangaroo was having fun. The rabbits were having fun. Miss kangaroo thank you thank you it was a long ride. You sure can bounce high. Wind for jumping. I want another ride please. Ok but it will be a bit squishy. I like the bouncing it's really fun. Now can we go home? It was really fun. Mum can I go again mum? Yes you can. You bounce really high. Plonk on the grass. Sneaky snake licked kangaroos tummy. The rabbits jumped out. Thank you very much.





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